Date: 2006-01-11 05:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rougewench.livejournal.com
I would actually change the structure of the first sentence to use the plural "students" and then use the plural pronoun "they" and the verb "are".

The second sentence I would also reconstruct rather than use a singular pronoun to change the end of the statement to read "didn't know that it is not appropriate to draw on the pages."

But that's just me.


D.

Date: 2006-01-12 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teross50.livejournal.com
I wanna know like "hse" knows 8-)

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